Wednesday, 25 September 2019

Afreen

Dear Mr Grinling
We are so sorry that We ate your lunch we need to eat because all didn’t find any food.We all wanted to apologise to you and we liked your yummy lunch.It is also so sorry we eat your delicious  yummy food.My favourite food of your lunch was the iced sea biscuits. Its so yummy your lunch we was so SO hungry we will not do it again because we was so naughty. The yummy delicious lunch was pretty good. We wish we found some food to eat At our dark brown tree.We all want to not be greedy and pesky by taking your magnificent lunch.

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4 comments:

  1. Mrs Duxbury26 September 2019 at 05:33

    Great work, i enjoyed reading this.

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  2. Anonymous26 September 2019 at 05:54

    Afreen I love your work.You do not have a single mistake and I cannot say a word!!!!

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  3. Anonymous26 September 2019 at 05:54

    i like the bit were you said hes food was magnificent
    only next time remember to put the sentence next to it

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  4. Anonymous26 September 2019 at 05:56

    like your work like really it is wonderful a lot better than mine keep up with it. I am making this comment because i like your capital letters finger spaces and your long and neat handwriting from malakai

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