Wednesday 25 September 2019

Holly

Dear Mr Grinling,

I’m sorry they got a bucket and swept the wor eating your scrumptious lunch but I  was hungry so  I ate it. A family came fishing and fished the whole sea and later so I was hungry your lucky that your Lighthouse didn't fall down and break. I’m still sorry I hope you forgive me soon.

6 comments:

  1. I really like that you put the a full stop and really love wat do you writing.

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  2. Well done Holly that was great work.

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  3. Well done Holly that was great work.I loved reading your work.

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  4. Great work Holly. well done

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  5. Holly your work looks great.

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  6. i like you work keep it up

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