Monday, 12 October 2015

Friday 18th September 2015
LI: To write with purpose.
The Bird keeper
Mr Hanson. At night time he lived in his campervan perched high on the mountain. In the day time he drove to the shop Once there was Bird keeper called to take care of the animal too.
Each morning while Mr Hanson take care of the animals Mrs Hanson worked in the kitchen making a delicious lunch for him. Once she prepared the amazing fabulous lunch  she pack it into a special beautiful basket and clipped it on the wire to the shop.

One Monday morning something horrible happened.
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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous12 October 2015 at 06:41

    you did very good and amazing work

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  2. Anonymous12 October 2015 at 06:45

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  3. Anonymous12 October 2015 at 06:46

    I liked the changes to the story.

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  4. Anonymous12 October 2015 at 06:47

    I LIKED THE CHANGES TO THE STORY.

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