Monday, 12 October 2015

Monday 21st September

Dear Mr Grinling
I came here to apologise for eating your delectable food, we feel terrible.

It was a sunny day we were flying in the air .We couldn’t find any food or yummy fish to eat. We were ravenous. Then suddenly a big storm came and we were sad. We couldn’t find any fish to eat. The next Morning we were expecting to have some delectable fish. We rapidly flew to the seaside and we found a basket coming towards us! A sandwich! The bread fell into pieces our mouths kept eating it. We were ravenous. We just ate it all were so sorry Mr Grinling we just couldn’t help it.

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