Monday, 12 October 2015

Friday 18th September 2015
        The Teachers Lunch
Once there was a teacher called Mr Gringling. At night time he lived in a hobbit hole perched inside the cliffs. In the daytime he walked to his class to get sorted.  
Each morning while Mr Gringling sorted out the class Mrs Gingling worked in the kitchen making a scrumptious lunch for him. Once she prepared the lunch she put it in the basket and sent it down the wire that ran from the Hobbit Hole to the big class on the rocks.

One Monday something terrible happened. The lunch did not arrive it was spotted by three bad seagulls.

5 comments:

  1. what will happen next in the story i like it.

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  2. I like your work because you have such good detail

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  3. I like your story. Did you spell Mr Grinling write. I like your first half but can you write your 2 half.

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  4. I like you work a lot

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  5. l like your work .Can you check your spellings

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