Dear Mr Grinling,
I wanted to write to you because I ate your sandwich. I am
so sorry.
Yesterday night there was a heavy storm I was so hungry.
Then I was hunting for fish but I saw a family camping and fishing and they ate
so many fish. I saw a flying basket and I wanted to eat your jam sandwich and I
wasn’t allowed. Suddenly your jam sandwich fell, I was trying to put it back in
but since I was hungry I ate it.
I am so sorry and I feel pity for you. I feel really sad. I
want to make it up to you. I am going to give you a cake. I am going a really special
gift that really expensive I think you might not think it’s expensive, well I
think it is so I really hope you love it Mr Grinling.
Yours Guilty,
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