Halima Jahan 3J
2/10/17
Dear mr and mrs Grinling
Were sorry that we ate your wonderful lunch.
Sorry if we were greedy. We would ask another day.
We ate your lunch because there was no fish in the sea.
We will make sure it never happen again.
Sorry however there
was no fish probally
The fisherman took them.
Nice story. Did you remember fall stops and capatial letters. Nice discribing words. I read your story it was great. You couldmake it longer.
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