Friday, 17 November 2017

year3 2017

Livia
O2.10.17
Dear Mr Grinling ,
Tom and Fred told me to write this but I SAID NO.

  So I did it. Sorry for stealing your lunch no one at the beach had bread. [seagulls cry] Hey it is Tom and Fred.my boss Told me to do this Bert is crying on the beach look outside . can you see him.
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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous21 November 2017 at 12:24

    well done liviva because you have such good handwriting.

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  2. Anonymous27 November 2017 at 02:24

    your story is f.a.b.u.l.o.u.s

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  3. Anonymous27 November 2017 at 02:25

    I love it so much.I like when you said I SAID NO.

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  4. Anonymous27 November 2017 at 02:26

    i like your writing.

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  5. Anonymous27 November 2017 at 02:27

    Right at the end, I think you forget a question mark. And im not sure if you can see through emails.And i think you forget a captal letter

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