Friday, 17 November 2017

Year3 2017

Adjara
2.10.17
Dear Mr  Grinling
We are writing to you because we are sorry for stealing your lunch. Because the boss seagull rock
wanted us to investigate what was in the basket and people keep  about  us stealing food and no left over. So sorry I feel guilty and so sorry for doing this.

3 comments:

  1. Thank you for telling me that why you ate my lunch because i thought you were hungry.

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  2. On the second sentence, should it start with because? and also i think you forgot a capital letter at the beginning of `Rock`. The third sentence is very long.

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  3. Good very good be happy of yours and others okay so be good to other people blogs

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