Friday, 17 November 2017

year3 2017

Zaara
25.09.17

Dear Mr Grinling,
We are sorry we ate your lunch because we feel guilty and terrible. Please forgive us but if you   don’t then we understand.
We ate your lunch because our boss seagull – Rock (We don’t think he rocks)-Told us to steal it. We were very hungry because the people at the beach don’t bring picnics anymore and the fish don’t like us because we always chase them so they sit in their homes all day and watch television. We promise we will make Rock quit his job and tell him off.
We are so sorry and we will never do it again in the future. Although we shouldn’t eat your lunch, we were very hungry so we had to. We know we are very scavenging.  We are so sorry and we will never do it again. Sorry.

From Fred, Tom and Bert; the seagulls

Dear Fred, Tom and Bert
I will forgive you but you must not do it again. I will tell Mrs Grinling to make some lunch for you and pack it in the basket.
 Why did your Boss tell you to eat my food?
I felt angry and very hungry actually, but now I feel really jubilant because you said sorry.

From, Mr Grinling.

4 comments:

  1. I like the bit were you said the fish sat down in there home and watched television.Were you suppose to write a letter to the seagulls or from the seagulls

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  2. well done.I hope you checked your spelling.

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  3. I like your writting

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