Friday, 17 November 2017

year3 2017

Amirah
9.10.17

Dear Mr Grinling ,sorry for eating your lunch. It is because in the storm the shark ate all the fish.That is why we smelt your dlishus lunch that’s  why we ate your lunch. All of us feel guilty for eating your lunch.Next time we well ask before we eat your lunch. Mr and Mrs Grinling , sorry for eating your lunch.It is because in the storm the shark ate all the fish.
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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous20 November 2017 at 11:38

    Hi Amirh I like your writing .I think it need more discribing .At the top of your writing needs capital letters .

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  2. Anonymous20 November 2017 at 11:39

    Well done

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  3. Anonymous27 November 2017 at 02:22

    great job you have the netest handwriting in the world i realy injoyed your writing.

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  4. Anonymous15 March 2018 at 05:44

    well done Amirah.

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