Friday, 17 November 2017

year3 2017

Sarina
25.09.17

Dear Mr Grinling
We are sorry because we stole your lunch although our boss told to see whats inside or we wont get a lunch break.The people on the beach stopped bringing picnics.

Our  boss rock is a bully and so nosy. When he told us to do it he did it in a bad mood.If we do it will give us some money please.
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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous20 November 2017 at 01:40

    Well done

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  2. Anonymous20 November 2017 at 01:47

    The first sentence is very long. I think you forgot abut a capital
    letter at the beginning of Rock.But i like it.

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  3. Anonymous21 November 2017 at 12:16

    well done.sarina. your writing is good.

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  4. Anonymous27 November 2017 at 02:20

    I think you forget a capital letter.

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  5. Anonymous27 November 2017 at 02:23

    I really like your writing because its nice and very good be happy of your own writing good work.

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