Friday, 17 November 2017

year3 2017

Sawdah
25.09.17

To Mr and Mrs Ginling I am so sorry for eating your lunch, we were starving because the fisherman took all fish from the sea. We looked so much although we were hungry we are sorry. We smelt your delicious lunch therefore we ate it all up. We had to eat something.
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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous20 November 2017 at 02:17

    well done. I like your work. Have you used capital letters.

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  2. Anonymous21 November 2017 at 12:26

    good writing.

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  3. SAVvy22 November 2017 at 07:17

    Nice conjunctions !

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  4. Anonymous27 November 2017 at 02:20

    I love your work.Well done!Best work ever!

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  5. Anonymous25 June 2018 at 13:36

    Amazing!

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