Friday, 17 November 2017

year3 2017

Lily
25.09.17 

Hi Mr Grinling,
I so sorry that me and my friends ate your delicious lunch .We apologise I think we left some in the basket.All the fish ofer fish swam under the sea but smelt you lunch from far away so we fluw to the basket and dug in it was so yummy. Those mustard sandwiches were discusting how can you them.

Your wife is a good cook . Where do live Mr Grinling . However  were so sorry the fish swam away because the cheeky shark scared. them awayI am so so  sorry please fogive us. Mr Grinling can you share your lunch with me and my friends.


I,m realy sorry I  stole your food. When you forgive us. Were so so sorry. From scabging seagulls.
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9 comments:

  1. Anonymous20 November 2017 at 01:46

    Is a masing lily

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  2. Anonymous20 November 2017 at 02:18

    WELL DONE!

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  3. Anonymous20 November 2017 at 02:19

    HI Lily its meetyou GREAT STORY

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  4. Anonymous21 November 2017 at 12:25

    good work

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  5. Anonymous27 November 2017 at 02:12

    Great job for remembering a cappittel letter for the start of your name.What do you mean by scabging.

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  6. Anonymous27 November 2017 at 02:20

    Hi I love your work

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  7. Anonymous27 November 2017 at 02:24

    You forgot capital letters at the beginning of MR and MRS.

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  8. Anonymous27 November 2017 at 02:25

    You forgot capital letters at the beginning of MR and MRS.

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